Angel of Death

I call Rosalie! Name: Rosalie Hale Age: Looks 17 but really she's over 100 Race: Vampire Appearance: Personality: She is very conceited and can get jealous. But when she wants ...

I liked this very much. Some may say that you should show instead of tell but this is the Epilogue, and that's another thing, I think this should be the ...

Hey Fang! This was another good chapter and it was written well, I just was kinda confused by all of the figurative language you used. Let me see if I ...

Hey KJ! This just keeps getting better and better. And, I know I say this a lot, but I love Vick Dawson! He's so real and different from the male ...

Hey Ash, thanks for the heads up!! First off, I already love this because of the song you have in the beginning. Panic at the Disco is one of my ...

Oh this was so beautiful and I really have no complaints or critiscms because this was just well-written and great just like all of your poems are. This actually made ...

Hello Ky! I actually love this, I really do (but...) I'm going to have to agree with Connie and Jiggy on this one. This is well written, as all your ...

Ah, this hasn't had any reviews! Well, hello! I rather liked this piece but I'm going to be a little nit-picky. I know that this came in a dream (a ...

Thanks for the review Fangala. This really made me smile. I had to go through a lot of editing with this piece before I got it just right, and I'm ...

Ooh I like the version. It shows the MC's passion and it seems more believable and the sentences flowed well. Favorite Sentence: Everywhere she touched made my bones melt to ...

Hello kris! Ugh it seems as though I don't read enough of your work. I actually like this. I love the way it was cultured and the words flowed well ...

1.Total number of books you own? I haven't actually counted, but I probably have more than 100. 2.What was the last book you bought? The last book I bought was ...

This was pretty good and the length was okay for a preface. Her lips touched mine again and again leaving me breathless, grasping her waist, pulling her closer. My eyes ...

Well, there's no correct way to write a book. You just have to have good grammar and all that other writerly goodness. I write summaries and look at pictures and ...

Another good chapter! First off, let me tell you that I'm not good at picking out grammatical errors, so my critiques will just be mainly about the big picture. I ...